Seven, you are improving greatly in Flash!
I have to hand it to you for sticking it out and working on this despite Flash being a bitch to work with. I liked your use of tweens, movie clips and even frame-by-frame work. It's really cool how folks will help you out when you're a n00b at stuff.
Maybe next time you can clean up some of the sound to get rid of staff's background static, I'd recommend Audacity, it's free and sardonic and rig say it's a good one to use for music editing, so you know it's a winner!
You could also try animating the raptor if you use him again rather than using the photoshop pic, so it meshes better with the rest of the flash, but I'm sure that would be one hell of an ordeal, you were telling me how much a pain it was just to get the guys drinking beer and the clouds moving!